Attempt at erotic poetry

Trying a different 'vibe'. It may be a bit weird but It is an experiment at a particular type of erotica.

Cut me.
Knife to skin dully piercing my epidermis
Harder.
Let me feel the thin slice
cold with pain that boils blood to
ooze red velvet carpets that stain and cover us.
Lead your large delicate hands to my throat
as I feel your grasp
squeeze off my oxygen
while I passively fight for life and attempt
to regain control of my body.
Tie me.
Capture my wrists in your control
while I surrender to your commands.
I am at your disposal.
To you I submit
to your total domination.